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Somebody would says that there are holidays and then they end, but for me the holidays still are the magic time. In these days people feels joy because it is a time full of the calmness, harmony and love. The Christmas eve is one of the many days in the year in which families and friends can meet on the solemn supper in aim to celebrate Christmas Nativity. People have this awareness of the specialty of this day in which the whole Christian pray and gives to each other gifts. However I want tell you a story about my the best Christmas eve which had a place two years ago. Somebody would ask what was so special about it? Special for me because it was the last day when my whole family gathered together around one table. In those days were even my grandmother with us but now she’s dead. The memories of preparing the Christmas-Eve supper, decorating the Christami tree and all amazing moments at the table will stay in my head for ever.
Some people would say that these days, the holidays just come and go without a second though, but for me the holidays are still such a magical time. It’s a time for people to feel joy, peace, harmony and love. Christmas Eve is one of the few days of the year where families and friends gather for a festive supper to celebrate the Christmas spirit. People from all around are aware of how special this day is, to the whole of Christianity. Many Christians pray and give gifts to each other as part of this celebration. I would like to tell you a story about the best Christmas Eve I have ever experienced, it took place some two years ago. Why was this Christmas Eve so different from the rest, you may ask. It was special because it would mark the final time that my whole family would be gathered together around one table. It was the last Christmas Eve I would spend with my Grandmother who sadly, passed on the following year. To this day the memory of helping to prepare the dinner, decorating the Christmas tree and the wonderful moments shared at the table will stay with me forever.
Side Note: You really need to brush up on your grammer.
Somebody would says that there are holidays and then they end, but for me the holidays still are the magic time. In these days people feel joy because it is a time full of the calmness, harmony and love. The Christmas eve is one of the many days in the year in which families and friends can meet on the solemn supper in aim to celebrate Christmas Nativity. People have this awareness of the specialty of this day in which the whole Christian pray and gives to each other gifts. However I want tell you a story about my the best Christmas eve which had a place two years ago. Somebody would ask what was so special about it? Special for me because it was the last day when my whole family gathered together around one table. In those days were even my grandmother with us but now she’s dead. The memories of preparing the Christmas-Eve supper, decorating the Christami tree and all amazing moments at the table will stay in my head for ever.
decorating the Christami tree and all amazing
its christmas tree =)
that’s not worth 10 points, there are so many things wrong with that homie
Some say that holidays come, and then end, but for me, the holidays are a magical time. These days, people feel joy because holidays are a time full of calmness, harmony, and love. Christmas Eve is one of the many days in the year in which families and friends meet on the solemn supper to celebrate the Christmas nativity. People know the specialness of the this day, on which the Christians pray and exchange gifts. Two years ago, I had my best Christmas Eve. It was special for me, because it was the last time my whole family gathered around the table together. On that Christmas Eve, my grandmother was there, but she has since died. The memories of us preparing Christmas Eve supper, decorating the Christmas tree, and all the amazing moments we shared at the table will be with me forever.
Hope I helped
Somebody would say that there are holidays, and then they end. For me the holidays are a magical time. These days people feel joy because it is a time full of relaxation, harmony and love. Christmas eve is one of the many days in the year in which families and friends can come together to celebrate the birth of Christ. People are aware of this special day that many Christians pray and give gifts. However, I want to tell you a story about the best Christmas eve I’ve ever had. It took place two years ago. Everyone would ask "What was so special about it?" it was special to me because it was the last day my family was able to gather together, around one table. Even my grandmother with with us at the time, who passed away not too long ago. The memories of preparing the meal, decorating the Christmas tree and all of the other magical moments at the table on that night, will stay in my head forever.
Somebody would says that there are holidays and then they end, but for me the holidays still are the magic time. In these days people feel joy because it is a time full of the calmness, harmony and love. The Christmas eve is one of the many days in the year in which families and friends can meet on the solemn supper in order to celebrate Christmas Nativity. People have awareness of the specialty of this day on which the all Christians pray and give to each other gifts. However, I want tell you a story about my the best Christmas eve which had a place two years ago. Somebody would ask what was so special about it. Special for me because it was the last day when my whole family gathered together around one table. In those days were even my grandmother with us, but now she’s dead. The memories of preparing the Christmas-Eve supper, decorating the Christmas tree and all amazing moments at the table will stay in my head for ever.
really nice essay and not so many mistakes
Correct grammar (I assume this is what you were requesting?):
Some people would say that holidays only take place a few times a year, but for me every day is magical.These days, people feel joy because it is a time full of the calmness, harmony and love. Christmas Eve is one of the many days in the year in which families and friends can meet in order to celebrate Christmas Nativity. People have this awareness of the significance of this day in which all Christians pray and give gifts. However, I want tell you a story about my the best Christmas Eve, which took place two years ago. Some would ask: what was so special about it? It was special for me because it was the last day when my whole family gathered together around one table. In those days, even my grandmother was with us. But now she’s dead. The memories of preparing the Christmas Eve supper, decorating the Christmas, tree and all amazing moments at the table will stay in my head for ever.
Somebody would say, not says. Not feels joy, feel joy.
People have this awareness of the specialty of this day in which the whole Christian pray and gives to each other gifts. That doesn’t make sense.
However I want to tell you a story, not, however i want tell you.
This sentence doesn’t make sense: However I want tell you a story about my the best Christmas eve which had a place two years ago.
you spelled Christmas wrong.
Use spell check. And re-read the sentences b.c. some don’t make sence.
One would say that the holidays go by and then they end, but for me the holidays still are a magic time. These days people feel joy because it is a time full of calmness, harmony and love. Christmas eve is one of the many days in the year in which families and friends can meet on the solemn supper in aim to celebrate the Christmas Nativity. People have this awareness of the specialty of this day in which the whole Christian community prays and gives gifts to each other. However I want to tell you a story about my the best Christmas eve which had taken place two years ago. One might ask what was so special about it? It was special for me because it was the last day that my whole family gathered together around one table. In those days where even my grandmother with us, but now she’s dead. The memories of preparing our Christmas-Eve supper, decorating the Christmas tree and all of the amazing moments at the table will stay in my heart for ever.
Somebody would say that there are holidays and then they end, but for me the holidays still are the magic time. In these days people feel joy because it is a time full of the calmness, harmony, and love. Christmas Eve is one of the many days in the year in which families and friends can meet on the solemn supper in aim to celebrate Christmas Nativity. People have this awareness of the specialty of this day in which the whole religion of Christian pray and give gifts to eachother. However I want tell you a story about my the best Christmas Eve which took place two years ago. Somebody would ask what was so special about it? Special for me because it was the last day when my whole family gathered together around one table. In those days even my grandmother was with us but now she’s dead. The memories of preparing the Christmas Eve supper, decorating the Christamas tree and amazing moments at the table that will stay in my head forever.
Okay i edited it for you
Somebody would says that there are holidays and then they end, but for me the holidays still are the magic time. During the holidays people feel joy because it is a time full of calmness, harmony, and love. Christmas Eve is one of the many days in the year in which families and friends can meet at the solemn supper in preparations to celebrate the Christmas Nativity. People have this awareness of the specialty of this day in which they pray and give to each other gifts. However, I want tell you a story about my the best Christmas Eve which took place two years ago. Somebody would ask what was so special about it? That day was special for me because it was the last day when my whole family gathered together around one table. In those days where even my grandmother was with us, but now she’s dead. The memories of preparing the Christmas Eve supper, decorating the Christmas tree and all of the amazing moments at the table will stay in my head forever.
-i just copied the paragraph and revised it! hope that it helps!
Somebody would say that there are holidays and then they end, but for me, the holidays still are the magical time. In these days, people feel joy because it is a time full of calmness, harmony and love. Christmas Eve is one of the many days in the year in which families and friends can meet in solemn supper to celebrate the Christmas Nativity. People are aware of the specialty of this day in which most Christians pray and give gifts to each other. However, I want tell you a story about my best Christmas Eve which took place two years ago. Somebody would ask, "What was so special about it?" It was special for me because it was the last day when my whole family gathered together around one table. In those days, my grandmother was with us, but now she’s dead. The memories of preparing the Christmas Eve supper, decorating the Christmas tree, and all the amazing moments at the table will stay in my head forever.
Some view holidays as a time of rest that only lasts a couple of days or maybe weeks, but for me the holidays are still a time of magic. During the holidays, people feel joy because it is a time full of the calmness, harmony and love that only family time can bring. Christmas eve is one of the many days in the year in which families and friends can meet on the solemn supper to celebrate Christmas Nativity. People have awareness of the specialty of this day in which the Christians and others pray and give each other gifts. However I want tell you a story about my best Christmas eve which took place two years ago. Somebody would ask what was so special about it? It was Special for me because it was the last day when my whole family gathered together around one table. In those days even my grandmother was with us but now she’s dead. The memories of preparing the Christmas-Eve supper, decorating the Christms tree and all the amazing moments at the table will stay in my head forever. (by the way, your grammar is bad)
Somebody would say that there are holidays and then they end, but for me the holidays still are a magic time. During these days, people feel joy because it is a time full of calmness, harmony and love. Christmas eve is one of the many days in the year in which families and friends can meet on the solemn supper in aim to celebrate Christmas Nativity. People have an awareness of the specialty of this day in which the whole Christian community pray and give gifts to each other. However I want tell you a story about my the best Christmas eve which took place two years ago. Somebody would ask what was so special about it? It was special for me because it was the last day when my whole family gathered together around one table. In those days even my grandmother was with us but now she’s passed away. The memories of preparing the Christmas-Eve supper, decorating the Christmas tree and all the amazing moments at the table will stay in my head for ever.
That’s corrected as far as i know, it was my pleasure to help. I changed dead with "passed away" because it has a more lightened tone if you get what i mean.
Somebody would say that there are holidays and then they end, but for me the holidays still are the magic time. In these days, people feel joy because it is a time full of the calmness, harmony and love. Christmas eve is one of the many days in the year in which families and friends can meet on the solemn supper in aim to celebrate Christmas Nativity. People have this awareness of the specifically this day in which the whole Christian pray and gives to each other gifts. However I want tell you a story about my the best Christmas eve which had a place two years ago. What was so special about it? It was special for me because it was the last day when my whole family gathered together around one table. In those days my grandmother was still with us. The memories of preparing the Christmas-Eve supper, decorating the Christmas tree and all amazing moments at the table will stay in my head for ever.
Somebody would say that holidays come and then they end, but for me holidays continue to be a time of magic. Holidays make people feel joy because it is a time full of the calmness, harmony and love. Christmas eve is one of the many days within the year in which families and friends can meet on the solemn supper in aim to celebrate Christmas Nativity. People have this awareness of the specialness of this day in which Christians pray and give each other gifts. However I want tell you a story about my best Christmas eve. Someone might ask why is it so special? It was special for me because it was the last day when my whole family gathered together around one table. In those days my grandmother was with us but now she’s no longer living. The memories of preparing the Christmas-Eve supper, decorating the Christmas tree and all amazing the moments at the table will stay in my life for ever.
I changed some of it you still might consider changing some sentence structure it isn’t the strongest literary work, but its not bad. Good luck Add more detail about your grandmother and why this is so speacial to you
Some people say that there are holidays and then they end, but for me the holidays still are the magic time. In these days people feel joy because it is a time full of calmness, harmony, and love. Christmas Eve is one of the many days of the year in which friends and family can meet on the solemn supper to celebrate Christmas. People think that Christmas is about Christians and giving people gifts. However, I want to tell you a story about my favorite Christmas Eve which took place two years ago. Somebody would as, what was so special about it? It was special for me because it was the last day when my whole family gathered around one table. In those days when even my grandmother was with us, but she’s in a happier place now. The memories of preparing the Christmas Eve supper, decorating the Christmas tree, and all the amazing moments at the table will stay with me forever.