one more for u to read…opinions please?
My Boomer Tips
now u listen here....
u fukken scarred me down to the bone...
do u know what its like to be held against ur will...
held prisoner and have u heart turned to steel...
16 years old i was...still a girl with much to learn and life to live
u robbed me of all i could be and what i could give
dont for a second think i ever fukken loved u
u were a monster to me...a plague...like swine flu
do u know what its like to be laid down and raped
by a man who said he loved u...i could only dream of escape
u planted ur seed inside me...but my benevolence was stronger than
anything evil that u could reap
and an angel arose from the rotton fruit that u beared
..ur semen was cheap
missed the last days of my grandmother...to ur lack of esteem
and ur lust for control
had to say good bye to her through my dreams...
god...rest her soul
the best gift u ever gave to me....was ur gift of death
go and join ur kind....find ur place next to the beast named seth
i think u should know...these chains are breaking free...
because im gonna forgive u...LISTEN to me
never for a moment think im doing it for u..
this execution is for me...its time to break through
ur nothing short of a parasite...somewhat like a flea
ur grip is now loosened...im far stronger than u could ever be
i have 2 more posted..
a look at all 3 would be great...
thinkin about performing at open mic night





wow, your just pouring your heart out on this one..interesting story line but sad to read.
good but I would not do it at open mic night they might think you were raped and kidnapped or not. and i’m sorry about your grandmother… :’(
I think the poet had a bad experience in love affair and narrate us her bad experience,but i don’t know what do you mean by a fukken scarred me down to the bone,please advise me is your own experience